From f55094904e971dd34d726c73f9e387f6dfe35c53 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Adam Burgess <adamburgess@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 24 Jun 2021 23:05:24 +1000
Subject: [PATCH] change wording

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             <p><a href="https://github.com/adamburgess/linq#readme">https://github.com/adamburgess/linq</a> - <a href="https://www.npmjs.com/package/@adamburgess/linq">@adamburgess/linq</a> on npm</p>
-            <p>I use C#'s <code>IEnumerable</code> extensions quite a lot, and the javascript version, <em>linq.js</em>, is very large. My version is 1.25kb.</p>
+            <p>I use C#'s <code>IEnumerable</code> extensions quite a lot, and the javascript version, <code>linq.js</code>, is very large. My version is 1.25kb.</p>
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             <p><a href="https://github.com/adamburgess/alpine-apk#readme">https://github.com/adamburgess/alpine-apk</a> - <a href="https://www.npmjs.com/package/alpine-apk">alpine-apk</a> on npm</p>
-            <p><em>Alpine Linux</em> is a minimal linux distro, great for docker. I wanted to query its package manager, APK, from Node.</p>
+            <p>Alpine Linux is a minimal linux distro, great for docker. I wanted to query its package manager, APK, from Node.</p>
         </li>
         <li>
             <p><a href="https://github.com/adamburgess/nr#readme">https://github.com/adamburgess/nr</a> - <a href="https://www.npmjs.com/package/@adamburgess/nr">@adamburgess/nr</a> on npm</p>
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             <p><a href="https://github.com/adamburgess/celeste-high-frame-rate#readme">https://github.com/adamburgess/celeste-high-frame-rate</a></p>
-            <p><em>Celeste</em> is a fun platformer, with a banger soundtrack. The developers lock the ingame framerate to 60 fps, which is in my opinion <b>painful</b>.<br/>
+            <p>Celeste is a fun platformer, with a banger soundtrack. The developers lock the ingame framerate to 60 fps, which is in my opinion <b>painful</b>.<br/>
                This small patch overrides that limitation, and the game easily hits 240fps.
             </p>
         </li>
         <li>
             <p><a href="https://tarkov-time.adam.id.au">https://tarkov-time.adam.id.au</a> - source at <a href="https://github.com/adamburgess/tarkov-time">https://github.com/adamburgess/tarkov-time</a></p>
-            <p><em>Escape from Tarkov</em> has a day/night cycle. This site shows you the time, and how long it will be to a future time. Deployed on <em>netlify</em>.</p>
+            <p>Escape from Tarkov has a day/night cycle. This site shows you the time, and how long it will be to a future time. Deployed on netlify.</p>
         </li>
         <li>
             <p><a href="https://crop.adam.id.au">https://crop.adam.id.au</a></p>
-            <p>A helper for <em>ffmpeg</em>'s <code>crop</code> filter. Drag and drop an image and select it to get a crop filter in the correct format.</p>
+            <p>A helper for <code>ffmpeg</code>'s <code>crop</code> filter. Drag and drop an image and select it to get a crop filter in the correct format.</p>
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         <li>
             <p><a href="https://bundlephobia.fly.adam.id.au/size/@adamburgess/linq">https://bundlephobia.fly.adam.id.au/size/@adamburgess/linq</a></p>
             <p>
-                <em>bundlephobia.com</em> uses webpack. I've found it gives slightly incorrect results because of this. I also wanted to get the brotlified sizes for my packages.<br/>
-                This builds the package with <em>rollup</em>, using the <em>Skypack</em> service, cached with <em>redis</em> and deployed on <em>fly.io</em>.<br/>
+                bundlephobia.com uses webpack. I've found it gives slightly inaccurate results because of this. I also wanted to get the brotlified sizes for my packages.<br/>
+                This builds the package with rollup. Deployed on fly.io.<br/>
                 No UI as of yet, but it also generates <a href="https://bundlephobia.fly.adam.id.au/size/@adamburgess/linq?shield&brotli">shields</a> – see the readme of my linq package above for examples.
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         <li>
             <p><a href="https://github.com/adamburgess/image-builder">https://github.com/adamburgess/image-builder</a></p>
             <p>
-                I build a lot of my projects with <em>Docker</em>, so I've made my own base images. <br/>
-                Using <em>Github Actions</em> and a custom <code>Makefile</code>, they automatically update whenever a dependency changes – whether it be the docker image, an alpine package, a github/lab repo, or an npm package.
+                I build a lot (all) of my projects with Docker, so I've made my own base images. <br/>
+                Using Github Actions and a generated Makefile, they automatically update whenever a dependency changes – whether it be the docker image, an alpine package, a github/lab repo, or an npm package.
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